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Whispers spoken,
behind closed minds,
lies to the flies,
the remains of a corpse,

which you took upon yourself,
to carry,
which you took upon yourself,
to bury,

bury this,
the finger in your face,
forcing you to see,
the mirror in your face,

blinding you to see,
tears to these choices,
fears to the block,
upon which my truth sits,

smears to your warps,
lips to my sealed fingers,
the real you'll never hear,
but thought you always knew,

know this,
you sick, friendly foe,
you'll never ever know,
dare to the how of that,

which you sought to twist,
blinded by the smog,
of your own screws,
you took your hammer,

you nailed me,
I forgive you, just now,
Fuck I say,
to justify that,

which can never be said....
©2005-2009 ~Neutral-Stunlight
:iconneutral-stunlight:

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I cannot begin to describe, there is only tears from frustrated screams. No you all don't know!

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:iconmerely-mortal:
excellent gabby.

--
I love nought, the number that has no end,
love me, the you is my only me...
-G.E
:iconlesseyed:
very good writing, a little blatant but tho...

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Whats the sound of a heart breaking if no ones around to hear it?
:iconj4d:
i love it! gud job

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<3 Yeah we bleed just to know were alive <3
:iconneutral-stunlight:
Thanks for the vote of confidence on my angry piece! :-)

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Trust in that,
which we call thought,
for the truth of that resides,
within you, furthering all depth
:iconj4d:
its fine :hug:

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<3 Yeah we bleed just to know were alive <3
:iconjosh-roxton:
one of the most gripping poems i have ever read
it skared me a little
pride? proud?

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